FJ Outfitters T- shirts for sale

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Permalink Reply by paraextreme on August 5, 2009 at 8:22am

Wow no one has any thoughts.good bad hate it?Tell me what you think and what you would like to see changed maybe might make one more logo with changes.Got 2nd shirt on the way hopfully have them done before the meet on the 16th.Will have 20Med 50Large 50 Xlarge 30 XXlarge

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Permalink Reply by Boss73 on August 5, 2009 at 9:29am

Its good to see that you will have bigger sizes.. I was bummed when the first run did not have me size..

Looks good I like it..

Boss

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Permalink Reply by 5AND5TORM on August 5, 2009 at 9:52am

Oh I love to critique... just an F.Y.I., I'm creative director (glorified graphic designer) so I am very picky about type and graphics. This is not meant to be harsh or rip you a new one, JMHO.

my $.02
1. first off what is FJ outfitters?
2. FJ outfitters type is too big, if your name is that big, the shirt should be free or very inexpensive.
3. the FJ type does not do it for me, the "F" has too much slant on the lower arm, the J looks too much like an "L".
4. Outfitters has a drop shadow where as the FJ does not, I like type and graphics to share the same "light source".
5. the truck graphic has a bling plate, brush guard, air dam--too much stuff and too stock.

I do like the white t, too many black shirts theses days.

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Permalink Reply by paraextreme on August 5, 2009 at 2:17pm

Ouch 5and5torm.

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Permalink Reply by Boss73 on August 5, 2009 at 8:58pm

Well you did ask for thoughts...

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Permalink Reply by Vaughn on August 5, 2009 at 9:35pm

yeah, and he's right! make the" fj outfitter" smaller more truck less hype!
good idea though ,fine tune it.

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Permalink Reply by 5AND5TORM on August 6, 2009 at 9:26am

Sorry, just my honest opinion, that is what I would tell one of my designers if they came to me w/ that design.
I've been on the receiving end of many critiques so I have a developed a tough skin. I have to deal w/ clients that know nothing about design critiquing and attempting to art direct on a daily basis.
All art a design is subjective, if you like it go for it. If you would ever like some feedback or advice please ask. I am also available for freelance work if you ever need a designer.

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Permalink Reply by paraextreme on August 5, 2009 at 9:46pm

True i did.well i cancelled the order of the 2nd shirt logo totry and come up with another logo that i will post to get your thoughts before i order.did you guys like the rising sun on the 2 logo?give me ideas of what you would like on a shirt that you would buy.again thanks in advance jared

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Permalink Reply by paraextreme on August 6, 2009 at 1:55am

Thanks suecyde will do as soon as i get them done

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